This service provides a one-time, comprehensive, detailed review of your personal statement—designed to help you refine, strengthen, and elevate your writing before submission.

I will put comment on your hook, story, content (whether your content address what the program directors looking for in an applican), conclusion, flows, choices of words and phrases.  I might rewrite some of them as a suggestion 

This is a full diagnostic that shows you where your statement stands and how to take it to the next level.

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